This Girl..
Main Cast: Kim Jonghyun, Han Soojin (FC)
Minor: The rest of SHINee’s member and others
Genre: Angst, Romance, Tragedy.
Genre: Angst, Romance, Tragedy.
Disclaimer: I don’t own SHINee, they are SM’s -_- except all fictions character here.
Foreword: This is my first fanfic. WARNING! This fanfic is unbeta-ed, so sorry if you kinda find massive stupid grammatical errors and miss-spell words hehe.
Summary:
“Jonghyun, Move on! I bet she doesn’t want you to be like that as well!”
“No way! She’s totally the same.”
“Can you see and love me as i am? Not the girl in your past?”
CHAPTER 1; Move on, Jjong..
Jonghyun’s POV
This day, exactly our 2nd anniversary. Everytime this day comes, i just feels some parts of my soul has gone. Yeah, she took some parts of my soul.
I was lazy to just opened my eyes, i just want sleep a little longer but Key’s nagging distracted me.
“Hyung, wake up! Don’t pretend like you don’t know we have fansign event today!” he said—almost shout out--while knocking my door.
“I know I know, calm. Just wait!” I said, lazily.
I walked ahead to bathroom and get shower, and blablabla (you know, kinda lazy to describe wkwk)
I opened the door and went downstair to meet the rest of member who waited me. I sit beside Onew hyung silently. They look at me in kinda serious gaze. I know why, it should be because they know today is me and Haejin’s our anniversary. I just ignored them and instead grabbed some bread.
“Are you okay?” Onew hyung asked me.
“Hm..” I replied without look him.
“Doesn’t look you really are, Jonghyun hyung..” Taemin said.
“Really? I’m fine though.”
“Hyung, it’s already 2 years.” Minho said, look at me with serious look. I know they just cared about me, but I feel they are too much. I becoming angry and shout to them,
“What the heck happened with you all? I’m fine! No need to worry about! I know it’s already 2 years and i still can’t give her away from my mind. Is that my fault? Is that bother you? Just mind your own business!”
I ran to my room, and locked myself there. I hate them, I hate myself as well. Why can’t i forget her? Why?
“Jonghyun come on, don’t be childish. We just concerned to you. Out and prepare yourself now!” Onew hyung said in front of my room.
I didn’t reply his word. I just lied in my bed and covered my head with pillow. Hope that I didn’t hear anything. Anything. Include that doctor’s said back then.
“Jonghyun, Move on! I bet she doesn’t want you to be like that as well!” Onew hyung’s word echoed in my ear, in my mind.
“Like Minho’s said, it’s already 2 years and it pissed us off looking you still stuck in this moment. She loves you, and she wants you to be happy. And look now, are you happy now? Do you think she will be happy looking at you like this? Crying over and over begging her comeback.” He shouted.
I think he was too desperate see me down 2 years lately. I felt sorry for him so i opened the door and look at him, stand out with sad look. I felt my tears on my cheek. I hugged him. He hugged me back, tried to comfort me.
7 comments:
OMO jjong ;____; why u crying like that >.< why can't u move on :(
so sad to see him crying like that /sobs ;____;
tell me when u post the next chapter okay >.< make it angsty and super saaaad!! i wanna hace a good cry lol
hwaiting!!!
--your umma
*wanna have a good cry
lol typo xD
Happy you like it, umma :D
How about my grammar anyway? Hm 1-10, what's my score for that? :O
Sure, i will tell you ^^;;; I have to be in sad mood to can make good one haha.
u still have grammatical errors here and there but this is good already >.< u r better than me xD i am worst then u when i posted my 1st english fanfic lol
score for the plot is 7.5, but for the idea (the originality) is probably still 6 IMO *__*
but it's okay, u can still improve!! read many books and u can talk to me if u have a writer block :) i'll be there for u :D
--your umma
Haha ashaming >< Am i too confident to published this? haha.
Plot? Maksudnya jalan ceritanya? Hehe i will improve and make it a bit different then :)
Yes, i have to add so many vocabs, i lack at vocab-_- Writer block?
--your pretty daughter(?) lol
not at all :D don't worry :D this is good :D
cara penulisan kamu sama alurnya bagus, aku suka :D dan ga kagok lah pokoknya..
sering2 aja mikirin gimana kamu cari twistnya biar ga terlalu pasaran plot dan ide nya ;)
bagus..nambahin vocab bisa di thesaurus.com juga :D
writer block itu keadaan dimana lagi ga ada ide keluar sehingga ga bisa nulis hehe :D
--your very pretty umma lol
wah, keren. walopun bahasa inggris, bahasanya gampang dimengerti. keren keren :D
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